Winter Cycle

Winter Cycle

A Poem by Hannah

Murky ponds freeze, rain turns to snow

Tall proud pine trees, dressed in white, stand against the biting cold

Leave-less limbs dance in the gentle breeze

Furry rabbits poke through the snow, basking in the light

The deep snowbanks melt, snow turns to puddles

Bright sun, shining on the forest, brings new life

© 2017 Hannah



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Hannah
*reuploaded from my old account: http://www.writerscafe.org/HannahTaylor

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And so the cycle continues of seasons and years. Nobody told me life would be so long. Of course when I was young I thought it would last forever. Now, the cold settles in my bones and I can feel winter in more than just the change of seasons. But there are seasons of nature and seasons of mankind. All things have their appointed time.

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Hannah

1 Week Ago

Very wordly insights. The way you described the world . . . It very much is a cycle. Things come and.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

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I enjoyed. I'm going in a few weeks to a baby shower for another grandchild. It's not all bad, this .. read more
Hannah

1 Week Ago

That's a very good view to have! Cheers!



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beautiful, gentle imagery in your words. there is a depth beyond the snow. speaks to me of hope.

Posted 6 Days Ago


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Hannah

6 Days Ago

Thank you very much, Pete. There is something beautiful in the changing of seasons.
And so the cycle continues of seasons and years. Nobody told me life would be so long. Of course when I was young I thought it would last forever. Now, the cold settles in my bones and I can feel winter in more than just the change of seasons. But there are seasons of nature and seasons of mankind. All things have their appointed time.

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Hannah

1 Week Ago

Very wordly insights. The way you described the world . . . It very much is a cycle. Things come and.. read more
Fabian G. Franklin

1 Week Ago

I enjoyed. I'm going in a few weeks to a baby shower for another grandchild. It's not all bad, this .. read more
Hannah

1 Week Ago

That's a very good view to have! Cheers!
Have reviewed this one previously, Hannah, but it is well worth revisiting.

Lovely imagery and description of the moments when the depths of Winter finally give way to the rebirthing touch of Spring.

Very nicely written.

Posted 1 Month Ago


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Hannah

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Doodley. I know more about reading poetry than I do about writing it, but I like how this.. read more
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Gee
Winter to spring conveyed nicely in a few well chosen words.


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Hannah

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much, Gee.
Yes, a gentle and lovely tribute to the 'winters cycle' Nicely observed.

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Hannah

1 Month Ago

Thanks you, Astri.
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

You are welcome
another wonderful read and beautiful peice. thank you for sharing

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Hannah

1 Month Ago

Thanks again, Jackie. I appreciate you taking the time to read. I'll read some of your work in a bit.. read more

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