L.o.v.e. W.i.l.l. S.a.v.e. U.s.

L.o.v.e. W.i.l.l. S.a.v.e. U.s.

A Poem by Hannah Paige
"

if you're a bird, then i'm a bird

"

Letter each ideal.  Open a mind.

Voice your triumph. Exist for someone else.

 

When reality fails, Invest in hope.

Live with open eyes, and Life will show you the world.

 

Sever the vicious ties. Anonymous regret

has a Voice like truth. but Even truth tells lies.

 

Under each foot, waits a road not yet walked. 

So set down your sole, and don’t look back.     

 


© 2011 Hannah Paige



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You are good. He will love you.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Even truth lies, yes so true, awesome write here

Posted 1 Year Ago


"Under each foot, waits a road not yet walked.
So set down your sole, and don’t look back."

the last stanza hit home for me! an amazingly short but true write! love it!




Posted 1 Year Ago


Fierce and direct, the way intense poetry should be, well done, good read..

Posted 1 Year Ago


truly poignant piece of writing...

Posted 1 Year Ago


well writtened

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is short and the point. Almost like a poem by Ed Hart.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beauty liked it!

Posted 1 Year Ago


This is a lovely poem with an excellent word choices. I love every word.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Oh my goodness! This poem is gorgeous!! :) I loved this flow and concept of it. Great write!!!

~Lizzy~

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on October 15, 2011
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Hannah Paige
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I'm in high school, and i write while i'm waiting to not be. But it's more than that; i write because i can, and because i should. I like to tell stories that make people think or smile or cry, and .. more..

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