The Crow and the Dove

The Crow and the Dove

A Poem by Jared Michael Smith
"

The choice that I believe every person must make.

"

I was walking once upon the road,

When my eyes did see,

Fork the dusty path in two,

A great and mighty tree.

 

And in this tree there did sit

A black and stately Crow,

But on another branch across from him

A Dove of ivory glow.

 

The Crow did look with shining eyes

Just above its beak,

But then it was to my surprise,

The Crow began to speak!

 

And it spoke to me in oily tones,

"Hello, how do you do?

Are you lost, perhaps, upon the road,

In need of a friend or two?"

 

My reply was nearly breathless, "Yes,

I am lost as lost can be.

Ever which way (if you can say)

Should I take from the tree?"

 

The crow did shift with cheerful glee,

Upon his hardy branch,

But on the other side of the mighty tree,

The dove did further blanch.

 

"Of course, of course!" said the Crow,

Remaining ever bold,

"Take the path upon your left,

And I can promise gold.

 

Riches beyond your wildest dreams

Are found along the way,

All the prizes of the earth

Upon this path do stay."

 

Tempted by his glossy words,

Consider it did I,

But as I stood there lost in deeper thoughts,

The Dove I did hear sigh.

 

"True, great wealth does await you,

Down the left-most bend,

But may I pose a certain risk:

What about the end?

 

The path is sickly sweet with gold,

But listen to my plea,

The road down there ends with death,

Pain of high degree."

 

"He lies!" shrieked the Crow,

His feathers all a mess,

(And I must say, unlike before)

Of stately he was less.

 

His eyes now burnt with fire,

Hot as the setting sun,

And of his old and kinder words,

He was more than rather done.

 

"Do not listen to that ugly thing!"

The Crow began to scream,

"He knows nothing of which he speaks!

He lives within a dream!"

 

Frightened by this violent sound,

I turned my head to see,

The dove did look with loving eyes

And great tenderness on me.

 

"What are your thoughts?" I asked,

Much less ill at ease,

“If I should not take the road to the left,

Then what should I do, if you please?”

 

“I cannot lie to you,” said the Dove,

As if sensing my innermost need,

“The path to the right is no easy delight,

But the end glorious indeed.”

 

“You will be beaten, and you will be whipped,

With rods of the bloodiest steel,

And you will be spit upon by all of your foes,

Just to remind you that they’re real.”

 

“But those of the highest conviction,

Will e’er have nothing to fear,

For the prize that you’ll find at the end of the path,

Your eye will shed more than a tear.”

 

“After all the pain and suffering of life,

Awaiting for you there will be

A palace of gold and of love and of light,

Your home for eternity.”

 

The words of the Dove did ring in my head,

With a certain and sweet melody,

But as I turned my gaze back to the Crow,

He was glaring quite maliciously.

 

“Well then, the choice is yours,” he shot,

A growl in almost all of the words,

“The right or the left, which will it be?

The path of which of the birds?”

 

© 2013 Jared Michael Smith


Author's Note

Jared Michael Smith
I REALLY need some advice for this one, especially on the subject of if I should have ended it where I did... Thanks!

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Pleasure on Earth, or Pleasure after death...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Instant gratification, or an eternal reward...
This was an AMAZING poem.... I love how you ended it without the narrator making a choice. This is really a thought-provoking piece...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :D And if you're screen name is an indication, I believe you are a fellow Poe.. read more
quoth_the_raven

10 Years Ago

Absolutely.... I'm addicted :p
Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Fantastic! :D
I absolutely love this poem.
You, my dear writer, have created a masterpiece.

A simple choice.
Heaven or Hell.
Good or bad.
Light or darkness.

Beautiful. Such lovely and smooth stanzas. It really painted the picture for the reader, and I love where you left it, leaving the reader to guess the person's choice.

I can honestly say this is a personal favorite for me. A write well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Wow, thank you so much! I've never had one of my poems called a "masterpiece" before. I feel honor.. read more
This was ABSOULTLEY AMAZING. A choice between good and evil. Light and darkness. Heaven and hell. It was amazing. It truly brought a tear to my eye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you. :-)
The choice between God or the Devil , good or evil , light or darkness...A powerful write,...:).................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............
I really loved this poem. I feel like it is very relatable because truly this is a decision everyone has to make when they want everything to be handed to them or to work through struggles on their own. I liked the ending because it left me as the viewer with a question and that made me think about how everything connects together with my own experiences. Very well written!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D
I actually love your composition on this. The image of the Dove and the Crow is very clear and their intentions towards the Wanderer is fully reflected on their actions. Your composition is classy, what with the forming of the words and the thoughts. I especially like the way you describe the things that are to be found in the road. I enjoyed reading it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you very much for all of the compliments! ^_^
EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

You very well deserve each one. :)
Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Thanks! :)
I love this! I'm incredibly happy I found it, it was a pleasure to read, you're certainly very talented. I think the ideas behind it are incredibly clever as well- your language and structure only serves to make it all the better. Unlike some poems I read, it's very simple, but I really think that it works for you here. I really have no criticism of it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Well, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

And thank you for the review!
Actually Jared, I think you ended it well... Wether you wanna go down the path of shallow materialism or self realisation ( that's what I thought it was about, tell me if I'm wrong...!) is ultimately left to the reader....and that's what you did..but not before clearly pointing the 'right' way...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jared Michael Smith

10 Years Ago

Well, thank you. :) And you're sort of half-right on the meaning. It was actually a little more r.. read more

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Added on October 21, 2013
Last Updated on October 22, 2013
Tags: crow, dove, black, white, ebony, ivory, choice, good, evil

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Jared Michael Smith
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I'm a pretty mild-mannered guy who enjoys composing poetry, playing video games, and drawing portraits. I don't think my writing's that good, but some of the people I have had read tell me otherwise... more..

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