Darkness Beneath Your Beauty

"Looks can be deceiving"- a scenario i made up

You are a beautiful woman

You're eyes are like the ones Tagore described in his poems

You're long black hair flows gracefully down your back

Your figure, although a little over-sized, is eye catching

The attraction to every man

And when you walk by, wearing those tight low-cuts that you love

I see their hungry eyes glued to your body

I laugh hiding the pain inside me

They do not know the person beneath the beauty

They do not know how black your heart is

That your dark essence and your poisonous smell

Kill the innocent flowers on your way

You take their lives like you took mine,

Like you took my mother's

Tell me what pleasure do you get 

Opening the scars you made 12 years back

Every day, every moment of this goddamn life

I am struggling to bring him back to me and my mom

What is your benefit, your treacherous woman?

I know there is not the slightest bit of love in him for you

So why ruin the purity of sisterhood?

Is it the trips to the exotic little places, the little gifts?

Then what? what is it you tell me?

Do you ever think about yourself?

Your own life?

He looks at you like his little sister

So go try to find yourself a husband and a job

And help us get rid of this burden and yes that's you

If you want to continue with the betrayal then fine

Go ahead!

Because now I'm here

Don't think of us as two soulless bodies

Who have no place to go 

You don't know how strong I am

You don't know how strong mom is

And one day we will soar so high that you can't touch  us

You will sit back pampering him

Begging him to take you along

That day i will laugh, I will laugh my heart out

O you beautiful woman, don't, don't do this to yourself

Come back to the right track 

For once take those longing beautiful eyes of someone else's man

And look at those who can be yours.

Author's Note

so what do you think?:)

Reviews

[Shubham's View]

I like your comparisons, but there is too much truth in it, a little flattery and pun wouldn't hurt. The ending however I really loved.

[Hidden Happiness]

Ok..thanks so much for reviewing:-):-):-D.

[ღ.яαg..]

I really like this :D I admire how you added and built a storyline as you went along. Great job!! xD

[RachelReaper]

I like this, i liked how you described "the woman" in detail from appearance to what she was really like as a person. It gives someone a clearer view of how they will look at people.