Dancing around in the Dark

a poem in the POV of Kaz`e talking about his feelings for DJ and how much he feels that he loves her. He doesnt know whether to stay with her or to let her go from the danger she will be with him.

Dancing among the fires of despair, Clinging to the dark abyss  with nothing to live for, I see a bright light above, The very light that flies as elegant should i be left in the darkness to rot, Or  go to her and feel what I always wanted to feel I choose her Because I was sure That I could be happy again lovely as a dove, She reaches out to me with a heart of gold, Calling out to me with a sweet, mesmerizing voice She gives me a choice I could stay in the dark or  go to her  I choose her  because i feel she could make me happy again.

Reviews

[JourneyBlu]

I love the opening line, it's very powerful and strong, a nice lead-in to the topic of love and hope. Thanks for sharing!

[Dezarae]

thank you very much ^^

[Adam M. Snow]

Ok, I like it lol... But really I do like it

[Dezarae]

thank you so much ^^

[Adam M. Snow]

You're utmost welcome