Loving you I

Loving you I feel no pain. 

Loving you I have no want no yarn. 

Loving you I still see the world. 

Loving you I can feel a kiss and the love the warmth it brings. 

Loving you I care more for the path ahead then pain that is behind us. 

Loving you I still have want but its for more time with you. 

Loving you I can’t care for the mistakes we make. 

Loving you I can be no happier with where I am. 

Loving you I can have a loving arm and caring hand. 

Loving you I can’t find worrier. 

Loving you I find me self in a hate. 

Loving you I feel there’s nothing after we wake up. 

Loving you is a dream one that is to good to be true. 

Loving you I find a real person inside me. 

Loving you I want you and only you. 

Loving you I care for you and only you. 

Loving you I can’t cry if you are not there. 

Loving you I can’t feel the world when I wake. 

Loving you I can’t find myself with out you. 

Loving you I need more of you. 

Loving you I’m lost in a dream, lost in my mind. 

Loving you I see others in happiness and I feel envy. 

Loving you I can’t have you. 

Loving you is a pain I can’t bare no more. 

Loving you I say my last words. 

Loving you i… 

Author's Note

Man This one is dark inside a box made of light.

Reviews

["writing by" KS]

Beautiful write. Such bitter sweet pain, laced with sorrow. I felt passion in your words. Thank you :)

[Holly Mason]

there is a candle flame behind the words
this is very well put and quite lovely even though in the end you feel alone
thank you for sharing

[Quattro Hall]

thank you very much

[Sami Khalil]

A sweet valentine's poem.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A great job, very easy to read and leaves one thinking, well done, good read.

[Kitt]

Great job! There's really nothing I can say, you've said it all. Thanks for sharing this with me.

[Monster ^.^]

the way you ended it... meant there are still a lot more to say... which really brings about the true meaning of love... that It could bring you far more than you could ever imagine. Great write!

[catofjade]

I love your comment, yes, exactly!!