For today

For today is the way I lost her.

For today is the way I live again.

I want her to know I still want her, still she wants another.

For today I say I am ok to die but I fear what’s comes after.

For today I want to kiss her but she does not lie in wait.

I question her and myself but still find no answer.

For today I still want to hold her hand and carry the weight of our worries.

There’s no one out there that sees the war in the rain.

For today I believe in a hell and I wonder if this is how it smells.

For today I walk in the rain following along unknown streets and today I think of home.

Thinking of the smells long past and the times spent in the rain.

For today I want time to past as if I was running down the keys of a piano.

For today I cry in still wait of wanting her… of caring for her.

For today I still myself and live for the moments yet to come. Hopping for a better tomorrow and a more loving girl.

Reviews

[Lemonhead]

Some good images in this, I liked the idea of time passing as if running down the keys of a piano. Some of it is a bit clumsy though and could be worded better in my opinion.

[Quattro Hall]

yeah more then likely it was an old piece I was trying to fix it up. it seemed I could not do that with out rewriting the whole thing. which then I feel it would have lost what was going on when I wrote it. if that make since