I'm Not Perfect

I'm Not Perfect

A Poem by Havatara

I’m Not Perfect


You may say that I’m perfect,

that I have no defects or shortcomings.

I’m exact or correct in every detail,

and I’m far from unbecoming.


You say that I’m a goddess.

I have no true faults.

The real me, you see,

is locked away in a vault.


What you see is what you get,

so what exactly do you see?

Whatever it is,

it’s not the real me.


The real me is imperfect.

I have as many flaws as you.

My true meaning, I hope,

you don’t misconstrue.

© 2011 Havatara


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nobody's perfect, yet we can see something in someone which we feel and love about them that in our eyes makes them perfect.There is this someone in my life that's saying just what this write is conveying, but my love is so strong I take the good with the bad and that make it perfect in any relationship.
Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Preeeetty poeeeem...
Let me be more upfront. I loved how you talked about yourself realistically but made yourself sounds more awesome in the first place. Text colour suits the story... don't know how...
Great rhyming!
Preeeetty....

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Havatara
Havatara

The Town That Moved, St. Louis County, MN (aka Hicksville), MN



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