Haiku Sunset

Haiku Sunset

A Poem by Sharon L.H. Kelly

  
                                  

                               Ball of fire rests
                        On rippling waterbed
                              Preparing to sleep



© 2015 Sharon L.H. Kelly



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Your running 4-7-5. "Fire" is single syllable. How bout "a ball of fire rests". Very nice piece. I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

I wasn't sure at first about it, then checked. Fire is considered to be either one or two syllables,.. read more
Willard Wells

2 Years Ago

Thanks. I find a few of these words and the pronunciation seems to vary by the part of the country y.. read more
Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Agreed!
I love this! The picture is great, but maybe unnecessary, you've painted such a clear picture with your words!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Sharon! I appreciate your visits and comments!
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Such a very creative haiku! I love the description about sunset and this is really a pleasurable read :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review!
Sometimes, Reading "Haiku's" looked like breathing the scents of balmy air that comes with gentle peace. Very strong words you've used to this poem. Enjoyed reading it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely comments!
Love this. Perfect description and makes me want to feel it! Nicely done!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it!
Lovely theme for a Haiku. And the admosphere you create is wonderful with maching illustration.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!

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Added on March 16, 2015
Last Updated on April 11, 2015
Tags: Haiku, Sun, Sleep

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I am a Registered Nurse and Poetess. I especially enjoy Haikus. I love reading new writers and Read Requests as time allows. Regarding friends, I have one. Please only "friend" me if we have read eac.. more..

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