Haiku Moon

Haiku Moon

A Poem by Sharon L.H. Kelly

                    



             his glimmering face

             

    seeks me out through lace curtains


             the man in the moon






















© 2015 Sharon L.H. Kelly



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Sharon L.H. Kelly
Google image inspired.

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i hope he has only good intentions...
lovely setting created here.

j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

1 Year Ago

Me, too! Thank you for your review!
I enjoyed your poem, but what about switching the last two words in the second line?

his glimmering face
seeks me out through curtain lace
the man in the moon
I know a haiku isn't meant to rhyme, but I think it's catchy.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

You know, I kind of like that! Thank you for your read and suggestion!
Very beautiful imagery in short verse. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank YOU for your review!
Pictures often inspire poets to create. You've done that well here. I love the moon. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Many thanks! I appreciate your review. :)
Simply outstanding in few syllables...:)....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

That is high praise and truly appreciated!
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly....:).....
beautiful. my favourite so far. a very intimate portrayal of the moon

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
The shine of moon's always compared to the face of beautiful lady. Your deep Haiku treasures the value of gentle man in disguise. Liked it. Well penned.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review!
Beautiful haiku! I haven't written a haiku since elementary school, but you've inspired me to do so with this lovely piece!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review!
Very nice. I like it. You did a great job on this haiku.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Tina!
Tina Kline

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Fantastic!
Great Haiku:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Sharon L.H. Kelly

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your review! :)

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Added on April 6, 2015
Last Updated on April 7, 2015
Tags: Moon, Man, Woman, Wistful, Longing

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Sharon L.H. Kelly
Sharon L.H. Kelly

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I am a Registered Nurse and Poetess. I especially enjoy Haikus. I love reading new writers and Read Requests as time allows. Regarding friends, I have one. Please only "friend" me if we have read eac.. more..

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