I'll wait for you.

I'll wait for you.

A Poem by WindsorWolf28

I will wait for you,
Under skies of grey,
And oceans of blue.

On snow capped mountains,
And shallow caves.

In Heaven,
Or
Hell,

On dirt roads,
And pastures of green,

I will wait for you.

© 2014 WindsorWolf28


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Very romantic, but I think you should add more visual imagery and locations. While reading it I was yearning for more. For instance, you could include visual imagery of the open ocean, enchanted forest, rainy terrain or jungle. These are just a few examples. I hope this helps.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Very romantic, but I think you should add more visual imagery and locations. While reading it I was yearning for more. For instance, you could include visual imagery of the open ocean, enchanted forest, rainy terrain or jungle. These are just a few examples. I hope this helps.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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WindsorWolf28
WindsorWolf28

Pasadena, MD



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I'm a depressed person, that doesn't make me suicidal. I love to write. I hate math. I write mostly poetry and short stories. more..

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