An Evening Mood

An Evening Mood

A Poem by Helena

 An Evening Mood....


Lift me like an olive branch

and be my homeward dove 

toward those isles

that await a tranquil

evening moo

 

 In the dusk of a summer night

seemingly two, but one in soul

you and I and love,

our light at night and shade at noon ~







Thank you to the following poets...
Leonard Cohen
Pablo Neruda
Louisa May Alcott
William Earnest Henley
Jaddalin Rumi

Dante Gabriel Rossetti 








 

© 2020 Helena


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well put together...a mixture of voices blending as one. We need peace.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

3 Years Ago

Many thanks my friend. Appreciative ~ Helena ~

the perfect mood for any old time of day .. then when thy will is done, dance me to the end of love..... you have excellent taste and a fine pen ma'am

Neville

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

3 Years Ago

I appreciate you reading and reviewing my poem...thank you Neville!
Neville

3 Years Ago


you are most welcome tis but a pleasure and mine at that :)
Oh, the romance in this write is divine! So lovely. Helena, I just found this one today and I am sure I have not seen you at the cafe in a very long time. Hope all is well. Lydi**

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

3 Years Ago

Hi Lydia....long time no see Lol. Thank you for the kind words. Trying to catch up on things aroun.. read more
Lydia Shutter

3 Years Ago

My goodness.....I posted this review a year ago! Welcome back.
That's a great list to borrow from; you certainly have written an easy flowing read, full of energy and imagery! Very nice indeed... :-)

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful, gentle and amazing flow of words and thoughts. I enjoyed this poem Helen. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

5 Years Ago

Thank you again for your kind comments!
Coyote Poetry

5 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Helena.
sounds like a great evening

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Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

5 Years Ago

Thank you kindly Sir!
 wordman

5 Years Ago

you`re welcome
Very nice and lovely. Thank you for sharing.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Helena

5 Years Ago

thank you dear friend Sami!
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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7 Reviews
Added on May 11, 2018
Last Updated on July 4, 2020
Tags: evening, mood, homeward, dove. love, night, shade

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Helena
Helena

Banora Point, N.S.W., Australia



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