KNOWING YOU

KNOWING YOU

A Poem by Helvetica
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A short poem of a confused girl with confused eyes.

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I never knew what I saw in your eyes
It's strong and scared
It’s warm and sad
Embraces all contradictions

Is it your heart that I saw instead?


© 2014 Helvetica



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A person as a mass of contradictions, how true.
I love how you chose to express this sentiment (through looking in someone's eyes). It really does sort of catch you off guard the first time you see it in someone, even when you are sort of expecting it. I think the brevity of your work really worked in your favor here; fewer words made it easier to connect and feel instead of trying to focus on reading.
Well done.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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Added on July 2, 2014
Last Updated on July 2, 2014
Tags: love, saw, see, eyes, contradictiona, question, romance, blurred, unclear

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Helvetica
Helvetica

Marikina City, NCR, Philippines



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A Poem by Helvetica