Something Dark

Something Dark

A Poem by AK

Something dark taking over me-
I wonder, what could thou be?
That sucketh light from across my face,
Leaves me staring with a most strange daze;
In an abyss of thoughts am I lost
Tormented, troubled, that's my cost.
From its abode, all sound do steal
Survives but my voiceless appeal.
I know not yet whom thou be-
Just something dark taking over me.

© 2014 AK



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i like the shortness and bafflingness of your poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Ina
Brilliant poem. I loved the style of your writing and the theme. Very dark but without giving anything away.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Well written in the old style reminiscent of Edgar to me. The dark theme is interesting leaving open many possibilities. The Salem witch trials pop into my head, although I know its unrelated. Nice poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


AK

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing, Relic! It has indeed been left an open ended poem :) The Salem witch trials.. read more
Relic

3 Years Ago

You'e welcome AK.

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