BEST FEELING

Just a poem meant to all those who once fell in love but now they have lost hope in it

    


    

     THEY SAY LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT
     ONLY EXISTS IN A FAIRYTALE
     I SAY LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT CAN EXIST
     TO WHOEVER WHO BELIEVES IN IT

     MY PALS TELLS ME
     NEVER FALL IN LOVE
     CAUSE IF YOU DO THAT WILL BE YOUR BIGGEST MISTAKE EVER
     I ASKED WHY, THEY ANSWERED, "YOU CANT FALL IN LOVE WITHOUT GETTING HURT"
   
    BUT I THINK FALLING IN LOVE IS THE BEST THING ONE WILL EVER HAVE
    AND LOVE DOESN'T HURT
    LOVING THE WRONG PERSON DOES………..

Author's Note

WROTE THIS POEM SOME YEARS BACK AND SINCE I WAS SUPPOSED TO WRITE MY FIRST POST I DECIDED TO WRITE IT,SO WHAT DO YOU THINK OF IT?

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

I think you did a marvelous job! I really like the way you expressed love in stanza's 1 and 3.keep up the good work look forward to reading more.
-maria

[...]

love can heal any pain. you right we have to believe at our love and to other people. wrong person can teach us about our love and own mistake. sometimes we get hurt and sometimes we have to rise our love from our self. that s help us go thourgh the dark and times of the pain. i like what you write and what you try say. i think is realy beatifull. have nice day full of love . COAT

[B.J]

Very well said I can say been in that spot

[B.J]

Very nice and the last line says it all

[Scott Metro]

Very nice. Love is an ever challenging task. To define it is simple at times..to keep it..a riddle.
Good job.

Scott

[Hessy]

thanks that means alot