MY LOVE,SO STUBBORN

     

         IF ONLY TIME  COULD CHANGE WHAT I FEEL ABOUT YOU
         THEN I WOULD GLADLY GO BACK IT
         IF ONLY WORDS COULD CHANGE WHAT I FEEL ABOUT  YOU
         THEN I WOULD GLADLY SAY THEM.
         IF ONLY ANOTHER MAN'S LOVE COULD CHANGE MY FEELINGS FOR YOU
         THEN I WOULD GLADLY ACCEPT IT  

         BUT SADLY NOTHING CAN DO 
         CAN'T GO BACK IN TIME TO CHANGE  HOW I FEEL,
         NO WORDS CAN CHANGE WHAT I FEEL ABOUT YOU
         AND NO OTHER MAN CAN TAKE THE PLACE MEANT FOR  YOU
        
        
       

Reviews

[B.J]

Says it all in a few short lines. Very deep and poignant.

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great short poem . very sorb and describive situation. and maybe how times goes you change end all the best BLIXA

[Hessy]

thanks that means so much