Vanished

Vanished

A Poem by Akaila
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nature:)

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Vanished in thin air
All left to see
Wash the desrted desert fields
Large cactus and tumble weeds

No streetlight was in order
Not even the coyotes howled

Clouds began to form
Lighting began to strike
Thunder began to roar
As the wind grew stronger and stronger

Rain begins to plummet from the sky
Moon shined with an eerie white gray light
Shinning mysteriously across the desert island

Nothing stirred as the land watched mother nature take over.

~akaila~

© 2009 Akaila


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wow very imaginative I pictured it as I read it YAY nice poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a nice poem. I really like the imagery.

"No streelight was in order" especially.

Thanks for the review by the way.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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