Why?

Why?

A Poem by Hidden_identity
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It's not a very good poem in my opinion, but still decent.

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Why do you make me suffer?

Why do you cause me pain?

Why do you let this continue?

What do you gain?

 

I've asked

I've pleaded

I've begged

What do you want?

 

You've seen me cry

Why isn't that enough?

Why do my tears have no effect?

Why?

 

I hurt

I'm sad

I'm angry

I want to die

 

Why don't you oblige?

© 2010 Hidden_identity


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Very sad, and the ending gives it just a bit of a disturbing edge.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Hidden_identity

Neverland, SC



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I am an aspiring writer. I am currently writing about five stories right now. I would really be grateful to hear what other people have to say about them other than my family. I am a very private pers.. more..

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