Masked

I was hidden

Not even my own reflection

showed who I really was

 

I lived behind a mask

Blending in with everybody else

Unknown to even myself

 

Scared of criticism from others

I remained hidden

That is, until you came along

 

I found you

Or more like you found me

You were my light in a dark tunnel

 

You accepted me for who I was

My mistakes and accomplishments

I didn't need to hide anymore

 

You unmasked the real me

Reviews

[Veritatis Cupitor]

Nice.
short, sweet and to the point.

the golden stanza of this poem is that first one.. "Not even my own reflection showed who I really was". Great line, truly.
Did feel the storyline was too much of a cliche though. really wished you personalized it more or gave different sort of details to help.
otherwise, a great write

[stars are far]

that is really great
i loved it :)

[alexlessah]

Aww, i really like this!

[Emily Rae]

i can really identify with your use of the mask as an means of protection and comfort from a seemingly harsh world. acceptance can never be underestimated--it seems to disrobe even the heaviest of masks. beautiful write

[Tasha]

I loved this, lots of people live masked until someone accepts them. This was so relatable, excellent job. Keep up the good work.
♥ Ta'Shandra