When Will I Love You?

When Will I Love You?

A Poem by IPMONER

When Will I Love You?


Miracles just need to happen,

Because I can't have it open.

I just have myslef loving,

Someone who knows nothing.


Directions were just laid off,

Shame, don't have to think of.

Make myself all day staring,

On the eyes worth knowing.


Walks were the talk of the town,

You just keep on making rounds.

Talk was a thing we once had,

But, the intent was too bad.


My emancipation is vaguely seen,

As you keep on getting on between.

Ignoring me made  rush,

And even drew a bigger dash.


The three-part stair had you,

And wish it will get me too.

I know you know what it means,

You know I know hot it seems.


When will I love you?

The choices given are two,

Now, that I need you so,

Or never! that seem to be true.


© 2009 IPMONER



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Hmmm...very emotionally driven it seems, but thats good 'cuz it adds depth to your writing! Good work ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago


now!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved it, it was amazing. Good imagery, raw, heartfelt, well expressed, a very good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on June 2, 2009

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IPMONER
IPMONER

Las Pinas, National Capital Region, Philippines



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A Poem by IPMONER