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A Poem by Hiru
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'Love' is something we want to hold on to and at the same time something we want to let go..

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Once it was because of you I smiled happily,
But now it's because of you I cry aloud. 
Feeling so hurt!
What is this change?
Whenever I was with you I smiled. 
Whenever I talked with you I smiled..
The smile was destined to be with me!
But suddenly,smile left me and
It's just tears who is with me all the time now..
You never left..
But you changed my smile into tears..
Now, whenever I'm with you I get hurt
Whenever I talk with you I get hurt..
What is this change? 
Why did it happen? 
I don't know.
Now it feels like I'm destined to be with tears.!

© 2017 Hiru


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You are great at translating your feelings into words and the best thing about your writing is,its simple yet has a heart.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Hiru

6 Years Ago

yes,I like to convey my feelings simply as everybody can enjoy it.. your review really did encourage.. read more
Tushar Singh

6 Years Ago

😊 keep writing. I really enjoyed reading your poems.
Funny how a person you love could give too much happiness and at the same time take it back. Nice poem. Keep it up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hiru

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this encouraging review.!
I can feel an air of melancholy while reading this. Well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hiru

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review.!
You is the topic of glory nice to read keep up

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hiru

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.! It means a lot.!
I like this a lot very well written keep up the good work

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hiru

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Your review means a lot.!

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Hiru

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