A Poem by Hiru

The humanity is surprising.!

Oh! It's summer..Everybody enjoys.!
Going to beach, taking sun bath..
It's fun time.!But
But  "No..not everyone" 
A lonely girl would say so..
From top to bottom she had covered up herself.
She can't even show off her face.!
Even eyes are covered by a net.!
So what summer for her? 
She must have hated summer.!
How could she bear this tempering air and light?
Nobody understands.!
Rituals, traditions, religions have restricted her.!
What is the use? What is the meaning?
We all are human..
Our needs are same.!
So why is this division? 
No body knows..
No body cares..
But all enjoy.!
Letting our own sisters to suffer.! 

© 2017 Hiru

Author's Note

This is just something I felt.something which hurts me.! I'm not being a racist or someone. I just made my feelings into words. I believe a writer is permitted to write anything. So I gave it a try.! And I should say that I respect every religion and that is not the problem.

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This is so good. Every poem I read of you shows a different part of you, and. Believe me, I am fascinated.

Posted 4 Months Ago


4 Months Ago

oh ! I'm so happy that you like my writing and really some of my writings are based on my personal e.. read more
Hello, Hiru. I like the portrayal of your feelings. however, I am concerned by the use of punctuation such as full stops followed by exclamation marks. Is there a reason behind it? I personally find it confusing when I encounter both at the end of a sentence.
N. K

Posted 8 Months Ago


5 Months Ago

i'm glad you liked it.. i just used it in a way of highlighting what I said.. but if it's confusing .. read more
A loud portrayal of the pain of suppressed voice... We are ALL indeed human, and that is a fact lost on many... No one is better than another, all are precious... Beautifully penned..

Posted 9 Months Ago


5 Months Ago

yeah.. that's the exact thing I wanted to give out..I am so glad..thank you very much..
This is just spectacular work you have done here. You have blended many things together to bring forth an important message of hope and faith in a cause. Good work!

Posted 10 Months Ago


10 Months Ago

Thank you so much..! Your review means a lot to me.! :)
I agree with you Hiru... :)
Equality should be between everyone, and I understand your feelings that you've conveyed in this poem. You're not trying to offend anyone, just saying what's bothering you and that's totally okay :)
Great read :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


10 Months Ago

Ohh Thank you so much.! Your review means a lot to me.! You have totally understood and I feel very .. read more

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Added on April 16, 2017
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Sri Lanka

Love writing.. Because writing gives me a breath to live.. To go on in this hold be have strength.. To enjoy.. Writing can change a person's life.. It did to me.. It did ta.. more..

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