The Affair

the title says it all - and so does the poem ;)

It's so easy for my mind to forget while your hands are against my skin/

Still my body seizes the memory/

Trapping the tang of your tongue as I taste the last of your wine stained lips/

It's a mixture of sweet and sour, just like us/

Your embrace keeps me wet, pounding me like warm rain/

I bite into you so desperate to get inside yet we remain closed off/

Making the plight seem innocent for what we choose to ignore/

Never stopping to realize we are chasing our lives with one night/

Reviews

[Johnny Westbrook]

Oooh. Undercover lovers huh? Lol. It has good pasion and a hint of sexual seduction. I did have to read it twice so I could get and understand the whole picture. But that's not a bad thing. This is something that if you keep reading, you will visualize more and more

[Holly O'Brien]

thanks Johnny :)

[Steph]

This is a really passionate piece! I also think there is great imagery in this poem. My favourite line was: "It's a mixture of sweet and sour, just like us"

[Holly O'Brien]

Thanks Steph!

[Justin]

dont usually read this kind but i like it the last line perfect way to end it

[Holly O'Brien]

Thank you Justin! I appreciate the feedback! :)