Something's Wicked

for wicked wind contest

I swear this world is wicked
cause its hard to sleep at nights
I hear things in the darkness
So I always need a light

I swear this world is wicked
I tried to love before
but every time I give of me
they're always wanting more!

I swear this world is wicked
Is living even worth it?
Why does god bully me
for wanting things to be perfect?!

I swear this world is wicked
S**t, take a look around
the birds all get to fly
but I'm stuck here on the ground!

I swear this world is wicked
I try, I really do
but whenever I think I'm happy
it seems that I'm still blue! :(

Wicked WORLD!
Wicked BIRDS!
Wicked WIND...raised my dress again!!>:-(
And I'm not done ranting!
No I'm not done whining!
I swear this world is wicked!
Wicked PEOPLE!
Wicked PERCEPTIONS!
Wicked ME...hmm see how wicked it can be?!

I swear this world is wicked
I just want one day to go right
There's something about this wicked world
that's ruining my life!


                                       

Author's Note

this is for the wicked wind contest...just for fun.

Reviews

[Timtim]

This poem is WICKED! ... lol. I love it. i love it. Your quite a master with words. It starts on a very serious note...
"i swear this world is wicked" and the rhyme, keeps us in the poem, then it gets comical "Wicked ME...hmm see how wicked it can be?!"
it presents a simple twist to the poem, interesting.

I love your work

[Art]

nice...you have wickedly created this poetic view of the wickedness within this wicked world...wickedly

[Tenielle Mathews]

I feel like you were trying to say something about the world....hmmmn....oh right i get it...its wicked! Yet again you've done well, i loved the self reflexivity especially this line, "Wicked ME...hmm see how wicked it can be?" You seemed to turn the humour of such an overwhelmingly depressing situation onto yourself.

[M O R P H I N E]

Interesting. The rhyming pattern is pretty decent :)
That's what I like. And the story doesn't drift off topic which is good. I love the fact that it's simple and a lot of people are going to be able to nod their heads in agreement. Nice write.

[Jenna]

This is very funny

[Angel's Lady]

Wicked poem from a wicked girl,
writing to tease the wicked
in this wicked world.

Great job! LOVED IT!

[OT]

yay, another person who wrote it specifically for the contest haha thought I was a lone weirdo!! really like this! the repetition of "I swear this world is wicked" is brilliant, it drums it into you, and the message you're portraying is strong and highly relevant, it is a wicked world, but we must try and find the good!! happy new year!!

[cfix]

Oh My Goodness, this is way too cute I love this!