True Love

A few words for my good lady wife

Let marriage be our sanctuary
peacefulness our bed,
contentment be the pillow
upon which we rest our head,
and the love we've shared these many years
be woven as a quilt,
under which, within each other's arms,
we'll share this life we've built.

Author's Note

For my wife

Reviews

[Chris]

A sweet pause to start a day.

[Gee]

Thanks Chris

[charlie]

Unabashed sweetness. There are some times when I write poems like this for my wife, and she adores them. Betcha yours did, too.
Well done - lovely poem

[Gee]

Cheers Charlie.Only readers of poems I pen are those that read on here.

[Closing Thoughts]

This is so incredibly sweet! The rhyme scheme really enhances the soft, gentle, loving message, and the whole poem flows so nicely. Beautiful job conveying love.

[Gee]

Thank you,very kind

[Tiana]

Truly a beautiful testament to the love you and your wife share ... May the woven quilt continue to warm and bless your marriage ... Loved this poem, Gee ...

[Gee]

Thanks,glad you enjoyed the read.Take care

[jacob erin-cilberto]

truthfully? i am ordinarily not a fan of rhyme.....but if it is this natural and free and easy in its delivery...it makes me dance.
you say you write simple...but there is definitely an audience for this kind of poetry...and your work will dazzle them.

[Gee]

Wasn't expecting that,thank you very much for a great review.

[wordman]

a beautiful tribute,loved it

[Gee]

Thanks,glad you enjoyed

[wordman]

you are welcome

[Lizardo]

A wonderful read and excellent, I really love how you added everything like, with the love of your heart.
This a wonderful poem

[Gee]

Cheers,very kind

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Amazing if she doesn't melt, somethings wrong with her. Great work. She should love it.

[Gee]

Thanks very much.

[Matching Socks]

That was very nice. :)
Not soppy, very romantic.

[Gee]

Quote"not a romantic body in your body"my wife.Very seldom show her my poems.
Thanks

[Gee]

Body=bone (1st one)

[Matching Socks]

Show her! Why are men such dummies sometimes. :)

[Gee]

In a Valentine's card maybe.
Thanks

[Matching Socks]

There you go! :) you should share, she will love it!

[Corset]

Gee, that was so beautiful, the rhyming tight and the sentiments of true love overwhelming, excellent.

[Gee]

Thanks,surprising sometimes at how good comments are for such simple verse.That said,I'll take anything offered,good or bad.Again thanks