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I am....

A Poem by Gee
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A constant

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I am night and day,
the sun and moon,
the ebbing, flowing tides.
I am the changing seasons,
reliable, predictable, dependable.
I am a smile for a sad face,
a dry shoulder for tears,
strong arms and a soft, kind heart.
I am proud, devoted, loyal,
loving..........irreplaceable.
I am eternally grateful,
grateful that I am her father.


© 2018 Gee



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once again powerful poignant. Lighter, yet just as powerful.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Fathers and daughters....thank you
very very powerful written words. thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you Roxanne
wow! very powerful & so professional

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you Carola
I think it's beautiful. Well written and a lovely description. Good job

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you...
Its simplicity is enormous in & of itself...well penned

Posted 12 Months Ago


Gee

12 Months Ago

Thank you..
I don't think my friend, I feel, and through Your simple yet powerful words, Your joyous heart was jumping to paint this deep and meaningful part of You... I loved "constant" because in this one word all Your thoughts are laid to us, very sweet, sincere and faithful, a real spirit of a Father, Bless You and Your little Angel*

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thank you light
This is my dad and he's the most amazing man I know. So, if these words are truly you, you're doing an amazing job ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

You're a lucky fella then Sam. I was raised by mum, so try to be to my daughter everything I would h.. read more
Sahm Moore

1 Year Ago

She's lucky, then :) It's always a happy thing when ppl can take tough upbringings and not let that .. read more
Gee

1 Year Ago

Not as lucky as I. She's a beautifully rounded young lady and we, the three of us share a great life.. read more
This moving piece presents imagery that suggests an all encompassing presence in a young girl's life. Actually, the girl's age can't be told, but the type of support described indicates a child or maybe an early adolescent. The speaker indicates his own gratitude, so the benefits are reciprocal. May it remain so. Very nice.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Spot on JTB. Thank
You are everything to her, and she will look for a man who will treat her with respect and love....just as you have.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Fingers crossed....thank you
Once again, I'm in love with your poetry!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Gee

1 Year Ago

Thanks Norah. All parents should feel this way about their kids. My daughter is a beautifully rounde.. read more

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Added on June 29, 2017
Last Updated on June 6, 2018
Tags: Father, daughter, love.

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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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