I am....

I am....

A Poem by Gee
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A constant

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I am night and day,
the sun and moon,
the ebbing, flowing tides.
I am the changing seasons,
reliable, predictable, dependable.
I am a smile for a sad face,
a dry shoulder for tears,
strong arms and a soft, kind heart.
I am proud, devoted, loyal,
loving..........irreplaceable.
I am eternally grateful,
grateful that I am her father.


© 2017 Gee



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Gee
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I don't think my friend, I feel, and through Your simple yet powerful words, Your joyous heart was jumping to paint this deep and meaningful part of You... I loved "constant" because in this one word all Your thoughts are laid to us, very sweet, sincere and faithful, a real spirit of a Father, Bless You and Your little Angel*

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you light
This is my dad and he's the most amazing man I know. So, if these words are truly you, you're doing an amazing job ;)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

You're a lucky fella then Sam. I was raised by mum, so try to be to my daughter everything I would h.. read more
Sahm Moore

4 Months Ago

She's lucky, then :) It's always a happy thing when ppl can take tough upbringings and not let that .. read more
Gee

4 Months Ago

Not as lucky as I. She's a beautifully rounded young lady and we, the three of us share a great life.. read more
This moving piece presents imagery that suggests an all encompassing presence in a young girl's life. Actually, the girl's age can't be told, but the type of support described indicates a child or maybe an early adolescent. The speaker indicates his own gratitude, so the benefits are reciprocal. May it remain so. Very nice.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Spot on JTB. Thank
You are everything to her, and she will look for a man who will treat her with respect and love....just as you have.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Fingers crossed....thank you
Once again, I'm in love with your poetry!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thanks Norah. All parents should feel this way about their kids. My daughter is a beautifully rounde.. read more
Wow.... A nice one. Liked it!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you Anjali
Anjali

4 Months Ago

You are welcome!
Well written - always hard to express the parental role - just so vast to cover but you have done it succinctly

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gee

5 Months Ago

Thank you. No words could do justice to the depth of my love for her.
Pity you aren't in the brownies Gee, the points you'd get for this would be enough to retire on. Smooth.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gee

5 Months Ago

S**t, missed off the wishful thinking...
Lorry.

5 Months Ago

Ha, still laughing at the budgie smugglers...but then I don't have to see it :)
Gee

5 Months Ago

Must be a poem somewhere in my vacuous mind
This is a superb piece, and a very enjoyable read. Beautifully written. Keep up the fine work!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gee

5 Months Ago

Thank you SJM
SJ Mullins

5 Months Ago

You are most welcome. :)
Oh Goodness.
This left me Jawstruck.
Beautiful 💕
'I am eternally grateful,
I am her father. '
😍
I Loved each and every word of it.
Keep Writing 💕❤
It's beautiful.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Gee

5 Months Ago

Thank you Rashi. My daughter is a beautiful young lady inside and out
Rashi Jain

5 Months Ago

She is lucky and so are you.
God bless you both😀😉
Gee

5 Months Ago

Thank you..

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Added on June 29, 2017
Last Updated on August 12, 2017
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Milton keynes, Buckinghamshire, United Kingdom



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