Forget Me Not

Forget Me Not

A Poem by Gee
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Then nothing but memories

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A bright new star,
memories,
tears, a smile and sigh,
a sibling's wish,
a "forget me not"
now seen in the heavenly sky

© 2018 Gee


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Tender words that touch the heart. The Heavenly sky where we wish our souls to be someday. Well done my friend.
Richie b.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank yo Richie
So sad, in a very nicely presented poem

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you..
A subtle and melancholy gem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Ken
Bittersweet sadness came from this sweet poem of yours Gee. Made me want to cry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Good morning Dee, thank you.
Onlyme

5 Years Ago

Morning Gee.
This is bittersweet.... sweet but sad, and you can feel it tug at your heart. I hope writing it helped you with feelings of loss, wherever they may have originated.. (add an apostrophe after sibling. Quick English nerd edit of mine, otherwise breath-taking). Lovely and contemplative.

Posted 5 Years Ago


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Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Alexa. Hope you are all well
The last line threw me a bit, but one things for sure Gee, the words are simply beautiful. You have captured a silent thought onto the page and left me eerily silent, which is always a good sign in many ways, but mostly just that your thought became the readers, while theirs became "wish I wrote that." :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Hi Lorry, thank you
I lost my sister two weeks before Christmas, due to complications of asthma. There is never a day that goes by that I do not think of her or talk to her as though she were listening. This resonated deeply with me. Thank you, Gordon!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

I'm so sorry for your loss Kelly.
Thank you for commenting.
Hope all is well with you .. read more
Beautiful, and moving.
Well composed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Charlie
You done good my friend & I'm sure that no one here would ever contradict....N

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Neville.
Hope you are well my friend
Neville

5 Years Ago

My pleasure Gee & yes, fine here ta...
siblings, best friends...memories like stars...they pass but the light remains visible for ages.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Gee

5 Years Ago

Indeed.
Thank you Jacob, hope all is well with you

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Added on July 27, 2018
Last Updated on July 28, 2018
Tags: Love, death, memories, sibling

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Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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