He will be...

He will be...

A Poem by Gee
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Memories

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He will be forever summer,
a warm, floral scented breeze,
blue skies and single clouds,
clouds that drift slowly, silently, to a place unknown,
perhaps to where he now rests, peacefully,
with those that went before...

He will be an aching heart and tears,
a pain that only time can heal,
a chasm to be filled with memories,
memories of childhood days,
of sibling love, laughter,
of all that is good in life,
in mankind.

He will be stories and smiles,
a warm glow,
dreams,
loved,
loved,
loved...

and forever missed.

© 2018 Gee


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A sad but very gentle and love filled refrain written in flowing, glowing freeverse style.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


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Gee

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you John.
This is extremely touching. So raw- get vividly meaningful and causes self examination of my own life and who “will I be?”

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Gee

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you Melissa
This is a truly heartfelt and melancholic (understandably) commemorating the Dear departed.

Thank you for sharing such personal aspect of your life. And may The Creator of all souls keep you strong and safe!

Well done!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Gee

3 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words
A heartfelt poem, Gee. Who can speak to a poets grief better than another poet.
Thanks for the share.
Tom

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Cheers Tom
Embracing, beautiful piece, enveloping your readers as we resonate its sentiments.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you Kitty
This is subtle, sweet and feels smooth to the ears. Very well written

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Again thank you. This was written for a poet who lost a brother last year.
Gee - I'm lost for words as this is a first I have read of yours. And yes, a true to heart memory. May I offer you a virtual hug?

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thanks Arthur, accepted :)
Oh so very beautiful- always in the heart never forgotten and may he rest in everlasting peace- we have beautiful memories to hold but never easy yo say goodbye to a loved one🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Thank you..
Death is one of the few certainties in life but we do struggle terribly with it. There is heartache but also quite a positive tone to your poem. Living on in memories is a kind of immortality. Sadly we don't always have these positive memories of those departed.
Well done Gee for this very thoughtful and affectionate poem.
Regards,
Alan


Posted 4 Months Ago


Gee

4 Months Ago

Cheers Alan

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Tags: brother, death, love, longing, heartache.

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Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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