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A Poem by Emilia Cole

"I hate you"

Thanks

"You're a mistake...you know that"

Yeah thanks

"Hey... you're just getting worse"

Yup sorry

"Go die"

How about killing me

"That would work... how 'bout you do it yourself"

Sure why not

"Great job now your making sense"

I know thanks

"Why are you still here?"

I don't want to go yet

"But no one wants you here so just leave"

Fine...bleach work for you

"Just fine"

Thanks

© 2017 Emilia Cole



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This would be funny if it didn't reflect the kind of talk that lots of kids are being exposed to on the web and now on the 'not-so-smart-phones' they got for Chrimbo. It's quite alarming in that aspect.
I'm guilty for laughing because I am a tad silly at times but the title was just about all you could say about this one Emilia Cole - Thanks.
:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emilia  Cole

11 Months Ago

legit my life story so yeah-Thanks
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

Youre welcome!



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this is a pretty brutal story. i really like it for a few reasons. first, it's realistic and i think it also shows just how much we need more empathy in society, and how we still need to address issues of bullying. more than that though, i love the writing; the dialogue is written very well, and i personally really like stories that are just dialogue. if you can tell a great story with just dialogue and no other descriptions, then you need to keep writing because you can create intriguing characters and situations! thank you for sharing this, Emilia!

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well girl...

Don't listen to any of those words if this indeed is your life.

I'm glad youre here! And congrats! You've just made a new friend! :) I've always wanted a little sister. xx Well written Emilia!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Emilia  Cole

11 Months Ago

Yay always wanted a big sii got 4 bros lol and im trying
This would be funny if it didn't reflect the kind of talk that lots of kids are being exposed to on the web and now on the 'not-so-smart-phones' they got for Chrimbo. It's quite alarming in that aspect.
I'm guilty for laughing because I am a tad silly at times but the title was just about all you could say about this one Emilia Cole - Thanks.
:)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emilia  Cole

11 Months Ago

legit my life story so yeah-Thanks
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

Youre welcome!

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Emilia  Cole
Emilia Cole

Clayton,Watertown, NY



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