Moon Lit Beaches

I remember the sky, it was cloudy with a misty dew to the eyes /

I seen it a million times/ and each time I’m surprised/

As the pillow is sand and I am opened so wide…I know you’ve seen it at day

But picture’s better at night/ as the moon shines and twinkles awed eyes/

 

The breeze moved the seas/ as my heart is at ease/

The tide sweep is a tease/

 creating Intense sensual anxiety/

 

Champagne bubbles is only trouble/

Making this fantasy a double/

This picture is better when it’s seen with a Lover…

Author's Note

I just moved to GA and realized there is not one beach here! Im a down south Florida Girl! I don't feel complete without the sand under my feet...I just wrote this to remind myself that I can still Fantasize...

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Reviews

[ANTO]

Im from wet and cold Ireland and I was warmed by this piece Honey54. I was transported to one of many of the warm Spanish resorts I've visited where people gather at dusk on beach-fronts to watch the sun change guard with the moon. Its such a special, levelling experience and you let me go back there as I read. Thank you.

[Honey54]

thankyou for that wonderfully exquisite review!

[Babe Roxx]

I Love the beach, and you described it so well, Honey...I'll always remember going to a secluded beach in Maui, how everything felt heavenly.

I agree, I can still Fantasize about it. :)

[Danielle]

Absolutely Luv this! You capture all that is special of the beach..." The breeze moved the seas/ as my heart is at ease is my favorite line. Nice flow

[Honey54]

thanx hun thankyou for taking the time out to read my work

[Allie]

I have never been to the beach but this really makes me want to take a trip...with my husband. lol

[Honey54]

its the best !

[afra]

awesome ...i loved ....great write

[Honey54]

thanx hun :-D