Indigo

I’m looking for the perfect pair of blue jeans.

 Ones you can wear traipsing through a grassy field

Or walking down a crowded city street.

 Jeans to look stunning in while eating out on Saturday nights

Or lounging on the couch watching Lost  

On a Wednesday evening.

They have to fit perfectly,

Snug enough in the rear to make my a*s look good,

 Dark enough so that my legs look like they extend for miles.

When I wear them men have to stop and watch as I walk by,

Their women elbowing them in the ribs for looking. 

The sort of jeans that make other women stop

To ask where I bought them, but I’ll only smile

And tell them I can’t remember.

They’ll fit better after every wash,

 Molding themselves to my body

Like they were made just for me,

As if they come to life as soon as

I pull them over my hips,

Sliding the zipper in place.

I’m looking for the perfect pair of blue jeans,

But the search goes on and on.

 

Reviews

[Big ol' Kahuna]

You already own a pair of jeans like that, but they aren't that dark, they are kind of lighter, and have the x cross tie thingy in the back, and yeah, those are the ones! Butt I don't remember where you got them at. I will just have to smile and ask you politely to pick up that pen I dropped, for the fifth time in the last two minutes!
This is a nice light theme, poking a little fun at the end. I like it.
Good job lady!

[Anastasia Starlena]

Jeans are so much fun there is nothing like a good pair of jeans. Baggy t-shirt and bluejeans are my favorite thing in the world. Such a wonderful feeling I love whoever came up with denim...

[cilla]

Oh my and don't we just want to wear those jeans like a second skin? This is a great write a little bit of humor mixed in with a very serious quest that can drive us all crazy. And just as we want other women to stop and inquire we ourselves become hypnotized by perfect snugness wrapped around feminine hips and the fluid movement of a perfect a*s and that luscious sway.

Like Cinderella's dress the perfect jeans don't stay perfect and in a few precious months we're back on that quest.

Great work you managed to say what all of us were thinking

[MIA ST. PAUL]

Where can I get a Pair! This is great. I love the way you take something so 'everyday" and turn it into gold!
Nice Job!

[MICHAEL]

Me too.

[BABSIE BEE]

I soooo love this. It could be me speaking. You got it right....all the things you request for the perfect pair of jeans are exactly what I request. I giggled as I read this because of it,s similarity. Well done. Hope you find them soon, cos I could,nt live without mine !! Cheers.
BABSXXX

[Alice Oiseau]

I recently just found a pair of perfect jeans that are exactly what you're talking about, lol! I'm wearing them right now. But "I don't remember" where I got them, haha!

A simple poem, though a delightful read.
Cheers.

[Flow~]

It is amazing how jeans fit women so well, a causual look that is just stunning when worn by a woman. yes it stops traffic, makes mouths drool and minds dream. you are making me miss being outside on a hot summer day just watching women walking by in their lives.

[Nix]

Hah, love this! Where an earth do you get your ideas from? Have you been shopping this weekend by any chance? :) I love how the poem reads, its almost a tease, you have to keep reading. I am still searching for the perfect pair, but if I find them I wont tell you were I got them, I'll just smile. LOL Love it! x