Fairy friend description

Fairy friend description

A Poem by Honourfish
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hes your description for your competition just kinda let it flowed and went with it xD hope you like it! got as much in as i could from what you gave us :P

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Wind whistled through the trees causing the leaves to rustle and fill my ears with the soft crackle harmonised with various bird songs. I hummed along absent mindedly as I progressed bare foot along the soft dirt path, the soles of my feet hardened so that small debris did not cause any discomfort just a mild pleasant tingle. A soft thudding moved from the back of my mind to the front as the sun flew high in the sky breaking through the scarce gaps in the overhanging canopy; sending beams of warm light glimmering down, twinkling in the minute dust particles that danced in the glow. The thudding getting louder as crossroads fast approaches, my heart joins the rhythm amplifying the sound. One step then another until we meet, the gap in the trees illuminated our faces as my rich hazel eyes meet his deep blue. Petrified in place both entities melded into the scenery, just two trees, shadowed by giants, next to each other taken aback by each others beauty. A hand reaches out and wipes the long dark hair out of my face and one word, one whisper; one note escapes his lips… “Hi” 

© 2011 Honourfish


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your poem style is impressed and unique and the description here is perfectly written with an artistic sense of imagination. the way you controlled the words is peerless. you should write some novels and I'll be one of your first readers.
...A soft thudding moved from the back of my mind to the front as the sun flew high in the sky breaking through the scarce gaps in the overhanging canopy... I ADORE THOSE LONG PHRASES.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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enchanting and magical :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Whoa I loved it. The flow and rhythm of the word play was amazing. As always it was amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


your poem style is impressed and unique and the description here is perfectly written with an artistic sense of imagination. the way you controlled the words is peerless. you should write some novels and I'll be one of your first readers.
...A soft thudding moved from the back of my mind to the front as the sun flew high in the sky breaking through the scarce gaps in the overhanging canopy... I ADORE THOSE LONG PHRASES.

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

hm i'm still jealous

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 10 people found this review constructive.

I'm gunna write more or less exactly what I just wrote to you on msn :P
Brilliant and beautiful imagery, I can imagine the scenery and scenario perfectly. It's superbly crafted. Great write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


WOW!:) I LOVE it:) I want that to actually happen to me!:) Thanks a lot:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2011
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