I miss

I miss

A Poem by Hopeless Dreamer

I miss my old life,
I miss what I wanted to be,
I miss being happy,
I miss feeling free.
I miss having fun,
I miss all I wanted to see,
I miss the past
for life moves so fast,
but to sum it all up,
I just miss me.

© 2017 Hopeless Dreamer



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You wrote what I am currently experiencing ! I can relate completely to this, I understand every verse you wrote but, because I’m going through the same, I’m afraid I have no advice to give you. I just hope we’ll both figure out how to deal with this as we go ...
great poem !

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very emotionally, it is set up very well, u learn the most from your mistakes, it either makes you better or worse but that is your decision, overall very great job :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You wrote what I am currently experiencing ! I can relate completely to this, I understand every verse you wrote but, because I’m going through the same, I’m afraid I have no advice to give you. I just hope we’ll both figure out how to deal with this as we go ...
great poem !

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heart touching, at some points in our lives we miss the person we were.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem is a true sadness, worded so very gently but clearly. That final phrase rings loneliness; a need to share with someone would surely help.. Its not always easy to find that 'special' friend however. Tis said to have a friend, one has to be one.. Your words prove you to be a special person. Don't doubt you'll feel happier soon, find more in life and - write beautiful and smiling poems. I truly pray and hope so, Hopeless Dreamer,

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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