Sweetheart

Your everything i wanted,

the boy in the moon,

And i'll be waitin' for you,

hoping you come soon,

The trees are shaking sweetly,

like my knees when you first met me,

The parkbench waits patiently,

my thoughts begin to churn,

when is it my turn,

to feel loves soft burn,

when is it my time,

to hear the windchimes,

or your voice.

 

this relaxing setting,

you and i beneath the sun,

typical feeling,

but from the truth i cannot run,

away,

i cannot run away from you,

i'll stay,

i'll stay daydreaming,

and in the nights im feeling,

your touch that is nolonger real,

curtains close,

my heart is sealed,

locked with your visions,

of summerlong hymns.

you and i and our favorite song,

but now i have to say its gone,

Your gone,

and i was wrong,

i always am,

but even though were torn apart,

i still see you in my eyes,

as my bitter winter sweetheart..

 

 

Reviews

[17thWhitePrince]

wow ... very nice ... although kind of sad at the end really ... but overall really really good ... the rhyme and rhythm were wonderfully written and thought out ... a marvel to read ... I liked it ... it wasn't too long or anything ... well done :)