My Dark Heart

My Dark Heart

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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A dark short poem coming from after a heart broken

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As the cold stone drives down into my heart,
I feel the blackness tearing me apart.
As my tears goes down to my face,
My heart dies down to all human race.
I thought I will love forever,
Now it will never be the same.
As my dark heart closest me,
I will lay in the dust for all eternity. 

© 2010 HorrorMaster


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Well, you are an alchemist of sorts. You turned that heart ache and emotion into golden poetry. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I liked this poem. I feel bad that your heart was broken. I'm sorry for what happens to people.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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broken hearts are a hard thing to deal with... but nicley written... i feel the emotion flowing thru the piece

Posted 14 Years Ago


It seems to show such a tragic death caused by heart ache that it makes you cry out and wish the speaker wasnt dying from the shear pain that he is feeling. Good job!!

--The Angel of the Earth--

Posted 14 Years Ago


A sad period of time captured creatively. A nicely penned poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very tragic and very nicely written. The pain in this flows outward, fantastic job on this one too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Not bad. You've got a good structure and rhyme scheme going. It kind of flowed, but I think it could be better. As for content, I think you did a great job in describing your feelings. Nice job!

Ironically Yours, Blade 3 Blood

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this! Nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this, but so sad. You expressed yourself in so little words. A broken heart can be healed, just give time for it to relax. Nicely done :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like the dark and deep tone of this piece..overall nice job on this..a very cool write..

Posted 14 Years Ago


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