Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by HorrorMaster
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One of my old dark poem. I wrote this one because one of my ex girlfriend was being mean to me.

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I am in the chamber of darkness
The demons torture me with sadness
I see nothing but tears going down my face
They're taking me a way from this earth with out a trace
Everyday I feel nothing but insufferable pain
Even though its not the same
They came to take me a way
In this darkness I should stay

© 2010 HorrorMaster



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Beautifully portrayed ..... shows your anger and frustration to break free.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Good write. With some slight word changes this can be a really good piece. Just reads 'mechanical' and for me that steals the true power that is hidden in this write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really love the imagery in this poem, and the rhyming scheme is awesome! Great write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


the definition of true darkness. great work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


thats almost exactly how I felt in the hospital when I had brain surgery. wicked poem dude.

Posted 7 Years Ago


It does feel that way sometimes... Nice job describing that dark emotion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very dark and eerie, kinda chilling. I hope its nothing more than feeling real down.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmmm i like it!!!!! but i would have prefered it without the note about the ex girlfriend, the poem would have had a darker nuance not knowin what it was about really.

Posted 7 Years Ago


An awful bout of depression. I hope it soon faded away. I like your poem though, it sure captures the essence of the pain you were experiencing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very haunting. Nice and compact.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on March 5, 2010
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HorrorMaster
HorrorMaster

Tamarac, FL



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Hello i'm Ira and i'm pretty much a horror writer. I have bad grammar and spelling or typos errors, but I tried my best, so please enjoy them. Also I don't like harsh grammar nazi saying (oh yo.. more..

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