I was stupid

A poem about being drunk and the next day you start having a hangover

I was stupid for going out drinking,

I wasn’t thinking right.

I wanted to have fun.

I throw up at my friends house.

Now with this hangover,

I feel like a dumbass.

I look in my wallet,

I realized my money gone missing,

I think they took my money, as I don’t remember.

I am crying with tears in my eyes,

My heart slowly dying.

I’m really sorry for everything,

I will never drink again.

 

Reviews

[May]

Wow. This was great. So blunt, I love it.

[Ethan Paz]

Effects always remain after the drkink. Good right.

[Levioshock]

:)

[Craig Froman]

You give us a powerful glimpse through your own experience of what drinking can do. Excellent, vivid imagery and emotion.

[deeps]

I like this, Well written

[Coyote Poetry]

I know this story. Many a bad mornings wishing to had used common sense. The description and story was real and true. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tina Kline]

The dreaded sickness and hang over. I think you've captured what this is so all like! Great job and hope you don't have to experience this too often, it really is no fun.

[chaffy]

um.. maybe next time drink with people you know and care about you?
that way even if you are drunk nothing really is going to happen..
well, i hope you feel better from your hangover.

[Star Wolf]

Know what you're talking about in this poem. But it seems we always do it again!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it. I don't think you should have drank then. Well thanks for sharing. :)