The gypsy-like leaves

The gypsy-like leaves

A Poem by Relic

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To flee and fly like jostling birds
or gray moths 'round a light.
To pirouette in lazy rings
while frolicking in flight.

Leaves--like gypsies--slip away
with a fondness for the wind.
Soon to sweep and persevere
in lives undisciplined.

Some will scurry in their haste
to pester pine trees praying.
Then they'll sit for just a bit
In fields where I was laying.

© 2017 Relic



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Autumn is resplendent in its exquisite beauty, in these verses. Loved the flyaway leaves like gypsies, leaving such magic in their paths.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

Thanks very much DIVYA.
DIVYA

1 Week Ago

You are most welcome!
I was sifting through your works and this one prompted me to write a comment because I have always loved autumn. I was born in it. And I do not give praise where it is not due; this poem was beautiful and soft. It felt like somewhere I remember. So thanks for writing so I could read.

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Relic

4 Weeks Ago

Autumn has always bee my favorite season. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts Anna. :)
Anna Marie

4 Weeks Ago

You are very welcome. Please keep writing, you are a breath of fresh air in the community.
Relic

4 Weeks Ago

I appreciate you saying that, thanks.
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Gee
Ah Autumn, the onset of longer, colder, darker days........I HATE THE COLD
Enjoyed the read muchly Relic, rhymes and flows so easily, trips of the tongue

Posted 1 Month Ago


Relic

1 Month Ago

Thank you Gee.
Lovely and whimsical. I can definitely visualize what you write. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Relic

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks. :)
I love reading your poems...this one has a very calming and nostalgic feel in it. Takes me back to my childhood days, in our old house on top of a hill, where i used to play. Lots of trees there.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

Thanks very much. :)
Serene...
Touched by the beauty in your vision
Yes I'm reading you today my friend 🙂

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

haha, I noticed. Thank you very much. When I have time I will return the favor. :D
This is beautiful!! :D Excellent poem, my friend. :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

Thank you.
Very pretty!! This is very peaceful and a nice call to nature. Good job!!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Relic

3 Months Ago

Thank you.
This took me to a hill with a tree and me lying under it beautiful thanks

Posted 4 Months Ago


Relic

4 Months Ago

Thanks for reading. :)
This is so peaceful, I feel like your words took me on a lovely walk. Fantastic work!

Posted 4 Months Ago


Relic

4 Months Ago

Thank you again. :)

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