Tormentors

Tormentors

A Poem by Relic
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Just thoughts.

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They're quick to pounce the weakest ones
with evil, sinister threats.
They're not concerned with what you'll do,
they've snagged you in their nets.

They'll use their might to sneer and wound
with words hurled like a dart.
Had I the tools to oust their hate
I'd purge their vicious heart.

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© 2018 Relic



Author's Note

Relic
No one likes a bully.

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I'm pretty sure, people who enjoy bullying-
Have a superiority complex. The reality is- They're miserable. Obviously, unstable. And want others to feel even worse than that. Even worse than they do.

It's heart-breaking to think someone, somewhere is going through this. I hope they have the strength and courage; to make a stand and for those around them, to not just standby and observe, but speak up against bullying.

And also, for others to protect themselves from falling prey to these- Tormentors.

Very powerful message in your poem Relic.




Posted 2 Hours Ago


Since my father was a longtime sexual predator & a narcissistic bully, I'm very familiar with the way these kinds of people have a radar to pick up those who won't fight back. Many times, becuz of my mellow nature, such bullies mistake me for a victim. But watch out when I have had enuf of one's predatory ways! You've painted the picture accurately using SHOW instead of tell, so we can recognize such jerks. It almost feels like you are sharing this out of a protective spirit (which I very much like) Fondly, Margie

Posted 21 Hours Ago


Relic

15 Hours Ago

My nature has always been to protect and share. On this site that doesn't always work. haha Thanks .. read more
short and powerful....pack that punch where it hurts. Well done!

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

Thanks so much, Emi. :)
emipoemi

1 Week Ago

my pleasure.
a mouth without a brain is a man out of control

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

I'm not sure I know what you mean?
 wordman

1 Week Ago

the people relic it seems to be a new bunch every 6 months,old ones hardly ever on or gone
Relic

1 Week Ago

Yes! I've noticed that too. Hardly any communication from people either. You leave them a review and.. read more
Very deep and interesting piece .lots of heart in this . Great job.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

Thanks very much, Sean.
Sean M. Addams

1 Week Ago

No problem
I am thrilled to see you back! I mean, really!! ; )

Posted 1 Week Ago


Relic

1 Week Ago

Thank you Kelly. You're very kind. :)

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