Broken Friendship

You left me cry

Screw you

I will never forgive you 

Put yourself in my shoes

I used to crush on you 

Thinking I need to help me through rough times

Thanks for showing your true colours

At the moment I have nothing to do with you

Your out of my life

I finally got rid of extra hell

Relief is roaming through my body

Thanks for showing me how much better I am without you

Living the two divorces is hard enough

I didn't want to lose you

I am glad I did

I got a glimpse of heaven

After tonight 

I am going to be the happiest person out there

I won't go back in time 

To resolve our issues

Cheers to moving on 

I am perfect and don't need you

Don't for a minute think you can hold this against me

I got a question

How do you sleep the night I saw you and you never talked to me

Does it not kill you

Till today I am trying to figure out what I loved about you

I am sick of playing these games

I feel forever young

I left the stress

Just tell me why I'm the only girl we both know

That you won't look or talk to

Cry me a river and I still won't turn back

I hope I don't fall for someone like you

It was a mistake

After all these years I finally let go 

Inta hayati

You remind me of pills

You say your there to help

But we both know you aren't

You negatively affect us

Take a bow

For your brilliant acting

Newsflash no one came to see the show

Let that sink in for a while

I hope you realize I would be the only one 

That was always caring and loving 

After being hurt numerous times

I still rise with my head held high

Do you have any idea in that brain of yours

How hard it is to sleep with a broken heart

What else could you possibly want from me

I have nothing everything for you

Even for my birthday 

You won't take an hour to come and celebrate with me

Do you really despise me 

Whenever we meet I am trying not to show signs of struggle

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

very passionate, angry, fresh wounds.

[The Fallen]

Feel the pain, and I can tell your feelings clearly in this. Amazing poem

[I am renee]

i feel your pain and i totally get everything you said, i love it

[khalid]

although it has alot of feelings of disappointment and frustration, you have really expressed you feelings in a very nice way...

[Leslie Philibert]

Quinnfin reviwed this very well ; a tough poem, angry but not irrational - you defend yourself in a poetic way...

[quinfinn]

so far, this is the best piece i have read. (your stuff) and i feel encouraged that you are not the weak, hurt little girl anymore. your strength and character shines in this write and i applaud your fire herein. this is where you stand tall and read the riot act to an imposter who doesn't know how to treat a lady. well done!!!

[Heather]

Thanks so much :)

[Tex]

This is so raw. So clean. I love how you *almost* turn the corner here:

After being hurt numerous times
I still rise with my head held high

but then return to having to deal with the mess. So true of real life.

this is similar to a piece I wrote, if you get a chance check it out: "Who You Are (song - blues)"

loved this, great write.

Nick

[Heather]

Thanks :)