Eyes

Eyes

A Poem by Heather

Oh those eyes
Lustful eyes
So majestic
Hidden behind the beauty
Behold the demons
Pulling me in
Let us pause
Let me realize
I have nothing to lose in this life 
Why not try something
Something may be to check off my imaginary bucket list
This life won't be so boring
I'd have something to live for
Something exciting
F**k anyone
Anyone who tries to get in my way
Living a bit on the dangerous side
Here's my advice
Go look at those crazy eyes
Eyes that crave your attention
Go on an adventure
Love every minute of it

© 2017 Heather


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found your poem very interesting and I enjoyed reading it.
I like the structure you have and some of the lines are great and powerful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Agreed. The word that rang in my mind while I was reading this poem (even though it's not in this poem) is "purpose". And I tend to struggle a lot with finding my purpose so I enjoyed this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Enjoyed this tough poem...and the imaginary bucket list intrigued me ! Great.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I agree.
"Go look at those crazy eyes
Eyes that crave your attention
Go on an adventure
Love every minute of it"
When those eyes look at you and tempt you. The above lines are needed. Go on a adventure. Thank you Heather for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Heather
Heather

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