Prologue of Sure-ness

Prologue of Sure-ness

A Chapter by life in a ne/on tube
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Kay chooses to rent an apartment, Apartment 123, but the land-owner keeps asking her if she's "sure" that she wants to go ahead with it.

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"Excuse me? Mr. Hatori?"

She walked up to the front desk.

"Hmm?"

He looked up.

"Ah, I'm Kay Beatrix."

Confused.

"Who?"

More confused.

"Uh, I was the one interested in renting Apartment 123, and we were going to seal the deal today."

Remembrance.

"Oh, Kay! Yes I remember you! You were the one interested in renting Apartment 123!"

Reminding.

"Yeah, I just said that--"

Cut-off.

"Now where did I put that key?"

Mumbling.

"Okay..."

Found.

"Aha! Here it is..."

Silence.

"..."

Questioning.

"Are you sure you want to rent this apartment?"

Answering.

"Yup."

More ?

"Are you sure that you're sure?"

Nodding.

"Yes."

? ? ?

"Completely sure?"

Pause.

"...Yeah..."

Acceptance.

"Okay then! Here ya go!"

Takes key.

"Uh, thanks."

Smiles.

"You're very welcome Koy!"

Correction.

"It's--it's, uh, Kay, Mr. Hatori."

Wrong.

"Sure thing, Klay!"

Slumps.

" *sigh* "

 

To be continued. . .

 




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Author's Note

life in a ne/on tube
I know it's written weirdly, but here's a little key to help you:

Bold = Kay Beatrix
Non-Bold = Mr. Hatori
Itallics = Inbetweens (actions and feelings)

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very interesting. leads me wanting more..so write more so i may know whats going on with this mysterious apartment! great job btw!

Posted 2 Years Ago


hahaha so good. I love how he says "OH,KAY!"
kinda like okay. hahaha knee slapper *akward silence* ....yeah.... I'm ganna go cry in a corner now....haha jk jk. Love the story. and please add more soon! nice work. bravo, my friend, bravo!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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