Someday.

Yeah......

I think of you and it makes me smile,

after all that year was worth while,

I really do not hate you,

We both have written slander ,

that was ment to hurt one another,

but that's not us,

Thats just trying to make the hurt subside,

Trying to drownd it in a pool of shallow despise,

when We could never hate eachother,

on the inside its a mixed up frenzy of,

love, loss, and memories.

Who knows why things ended the way they did,

but for some reason they did,

look at you and me!

We're happy.

And Some peoples paths are ment to split,

but nothings say the wont join again,

Someday.

Reviews

[samurai212]

good job hun :D

[Phalen Schuyler]

it's like reaching a mute point.

I like the way you write.

[.]

You have a wonderful wisdom about this fallen relationship. There is hope and compassion woven in the words as well as frustration. A very inspiring poem!

Hugs! - Ash

[Lilyonia]

Thats moving. And really good

[Zero]

You write some really good poetry. I really like this.

[Jack Martinez]

Lovely.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was cute. I liked it a lot because it reminds me one of my ex-boyfriends. I loved him a lot because he made me feel like this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Sharkapillar]

This is truely beautiful. I love the flow, the metaphors, the words. Excellent job.
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[Brian]

I can really relate to this poem, brings up old memories, everything happens for a reason, either good or bad. But keep up the good work.