But I Still Cry For You

I don't know about this poem.

But I Too Cry For You.

It was my fault,
But i can't let you go,
It was all default,
But I too, cry for you.

Things are getting hazy,
You died on me,
I'm starting to go crazy,
But I too, cry for you.

Imprisoned by a state of mind,
Lost by what has been done,
The truth is now so blind,
But I too, cry for you.

You did this to me,
Put me in this state,
This state has no key,
But I too, cry for you.

I am locked alone,
Still hating you,
But I am just unknown,
But I too, cry for you.

You were never sorry,
When you hurt me like this,
At least the night is starry,
And I still cry for you.

Reviews

[Georgia Gypsy]

This is such a part of life which hurts, it shows much to us that you wrote about it and are trying ot move on.
I can definately relate...
k

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It shows great compassion when you can still show feelings for someone who doesn't in kind.

[BABSIE BEE]

It,s painful when this happens, but still one manages to write about it as it heals the soul. You have done this so well. Thanks for sharing.
Babsie Bee xx

[Jibey]

Well... it certainly gets over the sense of grief that so often follows even when a relationship is broken with intent.

[Buni]

a reallyy good write! i have been there and still think what could have been.. a very well written poem! job well done!

[hiralarious]

So many emotions in this.. so amazing. My favorite part is "Imprisoned by a state of mind, Lost by what has been done, The truth is now so blind" for no particular reason. I just love those lines(:

[lastchildborn]

Crying is Gods way to allow us to wash our souls ,,I wrote that in a poem sometime ago.I have had to wash my soul many times, it will never be any easier ..GBU, Rodney Hatchell

[macgyvershe]

Love/hate, a often experienced emotional state. We've all been there. Where you turn on a dime and what was enless love turns to venomous hatred. This poem captures the state of mind. Brings it to crystal clarity and still lingers in tears of bittersweet madness. I like this poem extremely well. It spoke to me on many levels and it seems to be a universal emotional state that none of us can escape. Well written.

[Adeline]

whoa, really deep! this is a good poem, and awesome rhyming too. especially crazy and hazy, nice one. :D

[Tom Benson]

This comes across to me as someone with bittersweet memories. Perhaps somebody who hasn't dealt with the grieving process completely. It's continued refrain calls out as if like an accusing finger. Very well written piece. Tom