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A Poem by Ayisha Upshaw
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03/08/2016

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I hope you stain your favorite shirt
With the whiskey you drink
When I Upset you

Then struggle for weeks 
Trying different methods to remove it 

So you know what it's like to try and make peace with you

© 2017 Ayisha Upshaw



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Stubborness is not so easily removed. You manage to say so much in so few words, as well as giving it both a personal feel and something the reader can relate to.
I think the title helped this piece be an enjoyable surprise. I may just need to check out 002 :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

10 Months Ago

You're too sweet, thank you!



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I liked the poem a lot. The ending was perfect. You made the reader feel and understand the want for the person to remember his actions. Thank you Ayisha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stubborness is not so easily removed. You manage to say so much in so few words, as well as giving it both a personal feel and something the reader can relate to.
I think the title helped this piece be an enjoyable surprise. I may just need to check out 002 :)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

10 Months Ago

You're too sweet, thank you!
This is perfect. There's nothing else to say.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

10 Months Ago

Thank you! Much appreciated!

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Ayisha Upshaw
Ayisha Upshaw

TORONTO, Canada



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