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A Poem by Ayisha Upshaw
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03/08/2016

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I hope you stain your favorite shirt
With the whiskey you drink
When I Upset you

Then struggle for weeks 
Trying different methods to remove it 

So you know what it's like to try and make peace with you

© 2017 Ayisha Upshaw



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Stubborness is not so easily removed. You manage to say so much in so few words, as well as giving it both a personal feel and something the reader can relate to.
I think the title helped this piece be an enjoyable surprise. I may just need to check out 002 :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

2 Months Ago

You're too sweet, thank you!



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I liked the poem a lot. The ending was perfect. You made the reader feel and understand the want for the person to remember his actions. Thank you Ayisha for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stubborness is not so easily removed. You manage to say so much in so few words, as well as giving it both a personal feel and something the reader can relate to.
I think the title helped this piece be an enjoyable surprise. I may just need to check out 002 :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

2 Months Ago

You're too sweet, thank you!
This is perfect. There's nothing else to say.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ayisha Upshaw

2 Months Ago

Thank you! Much appreciated!

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Ayisha Upshaw
Ayisha Upshaw

TORONTO, Canada



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