Intrepid

Intrepid

A Poem by Erudite
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My soul has healed :)

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I'm a lyrical lycanthrope
My claws retract in the daylight
But the darkness brings out my might
I've embraced my shadow,
And take the high ground in every fight

Solace engulfs me
Ergo when war comes I can be
At peace with myself
Scars and all
I stand tall
And unafraid of your teeth
Cause damn I heal quickly
Growing smarter and stronger
After each encounter

But unlike you, the heavens look down on my paths
And smile.
Ah, the fresh air I breathe.
I savor the feeling of sand beneath my feet,
I look in the mirror and,
My face, it glows!
My courage grows!
Not even the threat of death could redirect my paths.
I've followed the light, and joy is my reward.

© 2018 Erudite


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"But unlike you, the heavens look down on my paths
And smile.
Ah, the fresh air I breathe.
I savor the feeling of sand beneath my feet,
I look in the mirror and,
My face, it glows!
My courage grows!
Not even the threat of death could redirect my paths.
I've followed the light, and joy is my reward."

This is an amazing work by you. I like the positiveness it spreads all around. The joy of utmost success is so wonderful which can easily be perceived in your work! Well penned. Keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I don't possess the talent to rhyme well in my poetry, so I applaud you there. Your writing holds a sort of 'classic-ness' to it, one I rarely see anymore. kudos

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"But unlike you, the heavens look down on my paths
And smile.
Ah, the fresh air I breathe.
I savor the feeling of sand beneath my feet,
I look in the mirror and,
My face, it glows!
My courage grows!
Not even the threat of death could redirect my paths.
I've followed the light, and joy is my reward."

This is an amazing work by you. I like the positiveness it spreads all around. The joy of utmost success is so wonderful which can easily be perceived in your work! Well penned. Keep writing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Erudite
Erudite

Riverside, CA



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Greetings, reader. Please do enjoy this music I've prepared for you, and don't be too bashful to take a peek at some of my writings. My poem titled "Ah, To Float in My Boat" is one of my personal .. more..

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