The Girl with the Black Bird's EyesA Poem by Ian TitianA narrative poem about love, which can be so inviting, alluring, captivating, and beautiful.The Girl with the Black
Bird’s Eyes “Is this love?” I asked myself as I observed her from afar Love is just an illusion, is what I’ve always taught myself But nevertheless, if an illusion is what it is ... The magnetism and influence on which it has on the mind Is stronger than any illusion, made by any magician or genius And the influence and control it has over our species, woman or man in the spiritual sense Is stronger than any drug could ever hope to achieve If treated properly, its euphoric properties could grant a level happiness of such radiance and truth But if abused and repressed without care and without concern Its deathly effects could amplify and could end even the happiest of man Knowing risks and reasons, I chose to ignore her As she swiftly moves, while I just stood frozen from afar, unable to look away The way her hair sways and the way she moves Its dire and gravely hypnotic effects on my poor mind has started Conflicting feelings begin to ravage my insides And her eyes ... So magnificent and cruelly captivating As she turns around and suddenly and takes a quick glance Through the looking glass ... Eye to eye, we were, and the distance which separated our physical bodies all seemed to have just dissolved into mist Her black, so beautifully royal eyes Makes me ignore, ignore everything else in our plane of existence The girl, she was of magnicent stature, with skin as smooth and pale as snow, eyes sharp and ravaging like a raven, and an airy, oxygen stealing smile Oh, how I was left with the most magnicent feeling of excitement and warmth of sparking electricity As she turns away My body chooses to leave earth And fly, high into the sinking sky As my physical form of existence melts away on the soft brown earth, many levels of heaven below That night I wandered and wandered Around and round in my spherical square chamber Unfit and unwell, with eyes most bewildered and heart most throbbing, yet so unusually so As the ghosts of the old smarthead fellows of philosophy hovered around me in clouds of mist Saying over and over again, “Love is just an illusion...” A black bird, unmistakably of the raven family, dropped down and perched on the weak and weary branch just outside my window Making sounds most inviting, I slowly walked over and opened it Instantly the raven flies inside and says, “Look at my eyes” Before changing form into the girl, the girl with the most entrancing presence Slowly and softly she walks over to me and says, “Think of what we could be together” At that moment I stood and stared The girl suddenly pulls out a dagger with a golden hilt, engraved in diamonds and pearls With it, in one swift motion she turns towards the ghosts of the old smartheads, and strikes them down My eyes glowed with excitement “I’ve made up my mind” I said as I quickly ran over towards the wooden table at the far end of my spherical square chamber “Hello...” I wrote down in such large letters, drawn and illustrated as best as I could, to capture the feeling of longing that’s been haunting me so As the girl suddenly reverts back to its winged form, I gave the letter to her As the raven flies away I stood just before my window Beginning my wait And a long wait it unfortunately becomes I waited and waited “Did she even receive the message?” I thought wearily after twenty four hours have passed Fourty eight hours then pass ... “Could the bird have died before it reached her?” Seventy two hours ... “Is she purposefully ignoring me?” Wearier and wearier I grew, and finally, after the seventh day after which I sent the message ... The ghosts of the old smartheads suddenly revives themselves “Love is just is an illusion ... love is just an illusion ...” © 2018 Ian Titian |
StatsAuthorIan TitianMalang, Jawa Timur, IndonesiaAboutArt is what enables our eyes to see beyond what is visible. It can captivate our souls and make us realize how beautiful and majestic the world around us is, for there is so much to be appreciated tha.. more..Writing
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