The days pass

The days pass

A Poem by Ice

The days pass,
and my wounds deepen into their stings.
My eyelids thicken and my soul caves,
as time plans to abandon without you, the days.
My feet carry me to the bathroom,
I lock the stall as it encloses me,
and the walls spin as my fingers desperately urge
for the words I cannot speak.
The blade releases my pain in crimson,
and I can finally breathe.
I unwillingly launch the lock to release its hold,
and I speak to no one,
not even you.
Heavy pain escapes my eyes,
but I keep it there,
and turn on my feet to run.
I see you over there, I can sense you,
I can smell you in the air as you pass,
and I know you see me, too.
I'm growing into a phantom,
a ghost of what I said I'd always be.
Day by day I find the paths to shed myself
of my very skin.
I'm unlike the rest,
as I embank myself
from the outside in.
The seconds smooth my hair away,
but the tears kept me awake all night
just breathing your name.
My eyes locked your silhouette as its thrive,
and the chills swept through my body like ice.
You frustrate yourself, you weep,
begging me to believe your every word,
and your pleads echo down my spine.
You touch me softly, pleading my name,
begging me to live the days.

The days pass,

and my body fills with maroon lines,

asking you in a whisper, a grazing of lips.

Why didn't you come for me?

© 2011 Ice


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This is such a deep, powerful write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This was a good write! I could feel the pain that the subject of the poem felt, which is a good thing. It's always better to connect with the characters. The poem flowed nicely and it was a pleasure to read. Thank you for writing and entering it into my contest.
~Aurora Lynn, from 'In Too Deep'

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is an excellent write..x

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this poem. Its a very beautiful one, it makes me kinda relax, reading this. Also, I love the picture you bought the readers, heart breaking but at the same time you can't help falling in its beauty :)
Nice written!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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