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The Fight


A Poem by Ice Queen of the Vampires

Shrouded in a prison of darkness

 

Trying hard not to suffocate

 

Invisible hands pulling me down

 

The damned screaming in glee

 

Fighting against the iron holds

 

Even though my will is weak

 

Darkness whispering into my tired mind

 

Urging me to just give up

 

The walls around me shrinking

 

Cackling as my resolves crumbles

 

Sinking further into the blackness

 

Giving up the desire to live

 

Something then appears above me

 

Breaking through my prison

 

The reason I’ve fought for so long

 

Renews my strength to survive

 

The damned scream in defiance

 

Determined to pull me down

 

Tightening their holds on my soul

 

As I struggle to free myself

 

This fight will go on forever

 

But I refuse to give up


© 2009 Ice Queen of the Vampires
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As I read this one, I felt as though the narrator was actually decribing his/her reality at a particular time..... I'm not assuming that the narrator is you because I don't know you; therefore, cannot make that assumption although the rose in the graphic suggests the narrator to be female....

I certainly have felt this way many, many times...stil do...a lot...to be blatantly honest.

This has a 'nightmare' feel to it....an honest feel..... The struggle to be free of those damned chains is so consumming....

Remember Dylan Thomas' 'Rage unto the dying of the light?'.....Your verse brings that piece to mind. One can only wish peace unto the soul you describe.....I know how the struggle can 'weaken the will'.....

Acute to the senses, deliciously dark.


Posted 1 Month Ago

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