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What Have I Done?


A Poem by Ice Queen of the Vampires

Ugly names and accusations

Echo loudly through my head

A never-ending barrage of insults

Slowly tear my soul into shreds

What have I done to deserve this?

I tried my best to be perfect

But apparently it isn’t enough

Since the yelling has yet to stop

As I quietly endure this pain

The numbness inside spreads

Until I can no longer feel anything

Am I even still alive?


© 2009 Ice Queen of the Vampires
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For some reason, I feel a connection with you because I believe the pain we've experienced is quite similar. Wow, I know that sometimes life hurts that much....until nothing is left to give and we wonder why we're even here.

Oh, I know we're here for for starry nights and chilly autumn days... But it has nothing to do with not appreciating life, yes? Because we do appreciate life. It's about circumstances, many beyond our control. Sometimes, we screw ourselves, but other times....

I really felt this piece, Heather. I'm sorry that you're sad, and I wish for you that someone near reaches out and gives you a hug. Too bad it's not Mikey, yes? It's so obvious he adore you :-) That's nice.

Blessings,
Apollonia



Posted 2 Weeks Ago

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